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| Author: | Blinx [ Wed Aug 27, 2014 7:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | TF2 shirt design |
Was wondering what you guys thought on this TF2 T-shirt design I was putting together, too much paint? Too little paint? Needs another element to it? |
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| Author: | K3D [ Wed Aug 27, 2014 9:50 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: TF2 shirt design |
Needs more red imho.. Why is he shooting a miniature demoman out of his rocket launcher was my other thought. |
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| Author: | Blinx [ Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:39 pm ] | |||||||||
| Post subject: | Re: TF2 shirt design | |||||||||
Ha, I never looked at it like that. Hopefully this one makes more sense. |
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| Author: | K3D [ Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:49 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: TF2 shirt design |
Internet sarcasm fail The composition with the demoman does not work because he is so small and is not really grounded anywhere in the picture. |
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| Author: | Blinx [ Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:56 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: TF2 shirt design |
yeah I was wondering if it would transpire clearly what's happening, I'll look for a way to add some sort of spacial awareness. |
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| Author: | Sam [ Wed Aug 27, 2014 11:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: TF2 shirt design |
Perhaps some sort of isometric grid underneath and lines next to them with their measurements. |
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| Author: | Blinx [ Wed Aug 27, 2014 11:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: TF2 shirt design |
or alternatively some sky Does the red really look like blood? It's meant to be just some splashed paint. |
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| Author: | K3D [ Thu Aug 28, 2014 12:10 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: TF2 shirt design |
It looks like a job for Dexter Morgan. So yeah it does look like blood spatter. The most recent one reminds me of a volcano erupting though. Perhaps if you put swooshes like they were rocket/sticky jumping might give more of a sense of what is going on. Depends what you are looking for in a T-Shirt really though. Who would be printing it? |
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| Author: | Blinx [ Thu Aug 28, 2014 12:24 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: TF2 shirt design |
I was gonna submit it to the workshop under the new merchandise section http://steamcommunity.com/workshop/brow ... erchandise Edit - Paint strokes look a little more directive now. |
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| Author: | Fr3ddi3 [ Thu Aug 28, 2014 7:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: TF2 shirt design |
My 2 cents. Personnally i think its too busy and conflicting makes it a bit jarring on my eyes to look at too long. Id go with a lightish blue background, minimise the amount of blood and then do something so the soldier does not look like a cut and paste job. And as others have said the demo looks out of place, moreso cause he's facing the wrong way. Ofc thats just my opinion |
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